dilemma

We have encountered a dilemma today, we need to re-film our entire sequence because the lighting is too dark and the camera is too shaky half the time so next time we are going to go out with a proper tripod and film this in a different way, instead of having the two yobs on the bench we are going to have one of them next to the cash point leaning against the graffiti, and the other one will be on the way walking up and down it before jumping off it. We will have a close up of the back of Mr Morsons head before cutting out to a medium shot to see Stephen staring at him. When Nathan walks away from the cash point Stephen will look out of shot to the other yob who will nod at him and then Stephen will nod back, So we can see from this that they are planning to do something.
We are also going to change the opening to have Nathan aka Mr Morson on the phone saying something along the lines of "it's been taken care of he wont bother you again".



EDIT - We have decided not to film again as we don't have enough time left so we are just going to complete what we've got to try get the best mark out of it possible